Transition to body of speech: First of all, we need to know what the problem in this statement is.Main point 1 When we are driving in a car while talking on the phone, our mind cannot focus on the road because one hand with the phone and one hand manoeuvre the car.
Niki sat in front of passenger seat during the low impact crash.
(picture of Niki Taylor) Transition to main point 2 As we all know, the government have banned the use of cell phone while driving.
They will be fine for $100 for first offense and the second offence will be $250 and the third offence will be $500.
•Supporting details 2 By doing this, I am sure people will not played their cell phones while driving because the price is to high!
But, when something distracting us we might lose focus on driving example when suddenly something happened, we have or tend to have slower braking time.
•Supporting details 1 To curb this from always happened, the government can also make some changes to the road rather than we use the law to reduce the number of driver that doing this ‘crime’.So, the government need to fine the driver with high prices summons.•Supporting details 1 Example like one of state in United States of America which is Massachusetts had given the penalty to the driver that has been found guilty.The government need to install “Rumble Strips” along road to get attention of the driver.•Supporting details 2 Rumble strips can also be called as sleeper lines which are to alert the driver if they have drift from their lane on the road.•Solution: Government need to fine the driver with high prices.Example –state of Massachusetts have given the penalty to the driver that is found guilty will be fine for 0 for first offense and the second offence will be 0 and the third offence will be 0.•Supporting details 1 Certain studies show that driving while talking on the phone can lead to injury or increasing the crash risk.•Supporting details 2 Example like a study by Suzanne Mc Evoy and colleagues of driver on 2005 in Western Australia have found that drivers that are using cell phones were four times tend to be in injury-resulting crashes when talking on the cell phones.Organization Problem, Solution, Solution INTRODUCTION •Open with impact/ Attention getter Cell phone is a gadget where people tend to use to make call, give short message service (SMS).(suddenly the phone is ringing and I picked it up while doing presentation).