This should be an argument for the opposing view that you admit has some merit, even if you do not agree with the overall viewpoint.
Notice that this model makes a concession by addressing an argument from the opposing viewpoint first, and then uses the phrase "even though" and states the writer's opinion/main idea as a rebuttal.
When you build a thesis statement that works for you, ensure that it addresses the assignment.
Finally, you may have to rewrite the thesis statement so that the spelling, grammar, and punctuation are correct.
Your job is to persuade by presenting a clear, concise concept that explains both how and why.
Include an opposing viewpoint to your opinion/main idea, if applicable.
In this body paragraph, after the Assertion, include any evidence–a quotation, statistic, data–that supports this first point. Show the reader how this entire paragraph connects back to the thesis statement. The first sentence of the second body paragraph should reflect an even stronger Assertion to support the thesis statement.
Generally, the second point listed in the thesis statement should be developed here.
The idea is to begin broadly and gradually bring the reader closer to the main idea of the paper.
At the end of the introduction, you will present your thesis statement.