It makes the listener feel that the piece is complete and well done. You want them to feel that you supported what you stated in your thesis.You then become a reliable author for them and they are impressed by that and will be more likely to read your work in the future.In the revised thesis, you can see the student make a specific, debatable claim that has the potential to generate several pages' worth of discussion.
A good strategy to determine if your thesis statement is too broad (and therefore, not arguable) is to ask yourself, "Would a scholar in my field disagree with this point?
" Here, we can see easily that no scholar is likely to argue that leadership is an unimportant quality in nurse educators.
The student needs to come up with a more arguable claim, and probably a narrower one; remember that a short paper needs a more focused topic than a dissertation.
Better: Roderick's (2009) theory of participatory leadership is particularly appropriate to nurse educators working within the emergency medicine field, where students benefit most from collegial and kinesthetic learning.
We can also gather the field (business) and the topic (management and employee turnover).
The statement is arguable because the student goes beyond merely comparing; he or she draws conclusions from that comparison ("can reduce the expenses associated with employee turnover").
The student's paper can now proceed, providing specific pieces of evidence to support the arguable central claim.
There are many words in this sentence that may be buzzwords in the student's field or key terms taken from other texts, but together they do not communicate a clear, specific meaning.
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